While I have read three of the best books in the business on how to write a book (William Germano on how to transform your dissertation into a book, and how to write an academic book that is not your doctoral thesis aka your second book, as well as Rabiner and Fortunato’s guide on how to write a trade academic-ish book), I think that writing a concluding chapter really is a skill in and of itself, and one that apparently is in demand, as my good friend Dr. Giovanni Mantilla (Cambridge University) recently requested advice on how to do that.
Need some inspiration as I begin revising the conclusions chapter to my book. Are there any outstanding exemplars that you recommend? If they are in the areas of Historical International Relations, International Law & Norms, and International History, even better. Thank you!
— Giovanni Mantilla (@giofabman) June 24, 2019
I try to write blog posts or Twitter threads upon request, but since this one comes from a good friend, I figured I had to make it a blog post as well.
As I said in my Twitter thread, I purposefully chose 4 books on water and 4 books on waste for three reasons:
(a) I don’t have the time to do a thread on methodology or on sanitation books,
(b) every book author I chose is on Twitter (so they can respond to my tweetage if they so choose!) and,
(c) 8 books should be enough!
These are the books I used:
On water:
Beyond the Big Ditch, by @acarse https://t.co/zM8ia1IRXO
Governing the Tap, by @mullinmeghttps://t.co/K1AxteWk46
Water & Politics, by @veromsherrera https://t.co/DANOWMXiEc
Just Water, by @christyzenhttps://t.co/IxG0X7CxW9
— Dr Raul Pacheco-Vega (@raulpacheco) June 26, 2019
How can I distinguish (or write) a good concluding chapter?
These are defining characteristics of a good concluding chapter of a book, in my view:
– Tells me, in summary form, what the author learned and also, what I SHOULD HAVE learned had I read the book from beginning to end.
– Shows me the “surprises”, the “plot twists”, the “coda”, the “afterthoughts”. For example: “After doing all this research on waste/water, I am left pondering about where to go from here. I advance a few propositions here”. Or… “When I began this book, I expected X. Lo & behold, I got Y”
– Explains to me why I needed to read the book in the first place.
– Provides a pithy summary of the main lessons the book offers.
These are some examples of good conclusions drawn from waste books.
In a brief couple of paragraphs, @rznagle powerfully explains to us why sanitation workers are literally, LIFE workers. We can potentially live without ever needing to call a fireman. We NEED sanitation workers on an everyday basis. pic.twitter.com/W99MUCzWpL
— Dr Raul Pacheco-Vega (@raulpacheco) June 26, 2019
.@rubbishmaker ‘s concluding chapter posits specific measures to reduce electronic waste globally. This is another excellent model of concluding chapter: “here’s what I learned about e-waste by researching this book, and what I think we can do to tackle this issue” pic.twitter.com/kJCQCYZRXE
— Dr Raul Pacheco-Vega (@raulpacheco) June 26, 2019
In my thread, I summarized conclusions from two anthropologists, a historian and a human geographer. For my water books, I chose two authors who are squarely political scientists, one anthropologist and a theologian/ethicist who works in interdisciplinary spaces. Now, for the water books:
In his conclusion, @acarse links back to his introductory chapter and the core message of the book: the Panama Canal requires more than infrastructure: it necessitates water and workers and policies and pumps. Powerful return to the core idea: more than a big ditch. pic.twitter.com/nqzGAPZZ7n
— Dr Raul Pacheco-Vega (@raulpacheco) June 26, 2019
And finally, @christyzen, in her concluding chapter (aptly named “Coda”) walks us through the core ideas she wanted us to get out of the book. It’s both a lesson in water conservation and the ethics of using, preserving, wasting and governing water. pic.twitter.com/a6z47vx3FZ
— Dr Raul Pacheco-Vega (@raulpacheco) June 26, 2019
I think the best advice I can give someone on how to write a solid conclusions chapter is very much along the same lines of the suggestions I made in my post on how to write a solid conclusion to a paper: summarise what you learned and don’t show that you’ve ran out of gas by the time you’re done with the paper/book manuscript.
I think linking back to the core message of the manuscript is key, as is providing clear signals that the research provided insights that would not have been possible had this book not been researched, written and this argument developed. I find that conclusions usually have fewer citations to scholarly work, and they’re more a narrative by the author, but different people write in different ways.
Hopefully this advice I’ve drawn from my reading of the concluding chapters of OTHERS’ books will be of help to new-ish authors. It will certainly be helpful to me, as I finish my own book manuscript(s).
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